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Post by shadow_scribe on Jan 23, 2008 16:20:11 GMT -6
Poems set yourself far apart
From everything
Out of what you are.
The bursting heart in this world
Calls for pencils,
One small poem for
Selfish rhyme.
Maybe it's all good,
But to say so takes too much.
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InspiringAuthor
Philosophical Poet
Hard work never hurt anyone, but why take the chance?
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Post by InspiringAuthor on Mar 31, 2008 4:09:36 GMT -6
Hey! This is really good. Five gold stars for you (now is the point where I would give them to you if I had them).
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Post by shadow_scribe on Mar 31, 2008 18:28:59 GMT -6
Aww shucks! *blushes*
I wrote this poem out of one of the techniques I posted in the poetry techniques thread. When I read it at Interlochen no one seemed to like it.
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Post by LadyAuthoress on Apr 1, 2008 15:49:14 GMT -6
I like it a lot too! Would you prefer virtual cookie stars, or virtual brownie stars? Unfortunately, I won't be able to dye them gold because I have heard that edible gold dye can cause cancer.
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Post by shadow_scribe on Apr 1, 2008 18:31:24 GMT -6
Eh?
Oooh, tough one. I'll go with cookies, just because brownies bother me in the special way that they don't look good to eat. They sort of remind me of square turds.
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