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Post by shadow_scribe on Feb 2, 2008 15:06:35 GMT -6
Hey, the story seems familiar. Did I read it before? Like in 5th grade or something?
I like it, but too many adjectives. And she burns on the sun. Gory much?
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Post by Camaraderie on Feb 3, 2008 19:07:37 GMT -6
The point, or idea thingamajig, was to construct a story using mainly, or only adjectives. I dunno. It seemed coolish then?
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Post by shadow_scribe on Feb 3, 2008 21:49:51 GMT -6
Yeah, but I didn't like the ending. It's so weird. It's put so calmly that I'm disturbed by it.
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Post by Camaraderie on Feb 4, 2008 6:31:19 GMT -6
Oh well. The calm part was supposed to be creepy, I like the idea of sort of isolating the concept of her death while looking for a type of utopian society, and how that goal reflected in the ending.
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Post by shadow_scribe on Feb 4, 2008 18:46:58 GMT -6
I give up trying to argue with you. Darn you small vocabulary!!!
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Post by Camaraderie on Feb 4, 2008 18:57:31 GMT -6
Wo0t! I win!
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Post by shadow_scribe on Feb 5, 2008 15:56:52 GMT -6
Die...
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Post by Camaraderie on Feb 5, 2008 19:16:45 GMT -6
*victory dance* *borrows santa hat of HAWTNESS* *continues dancing while wearing hat*
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Post by shadow_scribe on Feb 5, 2008 21:14:47 GMT -6
Um...*slaps Kat with spatula and drags hat away*
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Post by Camaraderie on Feb 20, 2008 16:22:48 GMT -6
Meanie. I've said it before and I'll say it again. You're a meanie.
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Post by shadow_scribe on Feb 20, 2008 17:11:59 GMT -6
Ehhh...
Want to comment on your own short story?
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Post by Camaraderie on Feb 21, 2008 8:08:37 GMT -6
But indeed I have, lol.
Can I at least have the hat back?
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Post by shadow_scribe on Feb 21, 2008 16:04:29 GMT -6
*hands her hat, but it has been burned, maimed, torn and flushed down teh toilet about 63 times*
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Post by LadyAuthoress on Feb 22, 2008 5:31:49 GMT -6
LOL
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Post by shadow_scribe on Feb 22, 2008 11:43:00 GMT -6
Huh?
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Post by bluefire on Jan 20, 2009 18:55:35 GMT -6
Text edit error, I assume.
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Post by shadow_scribe on Jan 26, 2009 15:48:21 GMT -6
I'm not exactly sure how to work the text edit stuff. It never seems to work.
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Post by bluefire on Jan 26, 2009 20:31:42 GMT -6
I dislike the graph setup. It's annoying.
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Post by LadyAuthoress on Jan 31, 2009 9:22:57 GMT -6
Meh, my post got screwed up. Oh, well.
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Post by bluefire on Feb 1, 2009 8:16:17 GMT -6
[shadow=red,left,300]I'm messing with my text![/shadow] Lol.
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