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« Thread Started on Feb 18, 2008, 12:31pm » | ![[Quote]](http://s1.images.proboards.com/buttons/quote.gif) |
I really like where it's going, and the detail's not too much and not too little. A few things though:
1. As soon as I first saw Jaden talk it seemed way too "girly preppy." I don't know if you agree, but it seemed a little preppy for him.
2. The violence in chapter 6 is fine. Just not more than that.
3. The Sorting Hat doesn't normally have conversations with kids when he sorts them. He just says something like "Gryffindor!" or "Hufflepuff!" you know what I mean? And I was confused about Zane's sorting a little bit.
4. I loved the separate descriptions between the houses, especially when Bastion starts a conversation with Luna. I just don't remember that boys are allowed to go into girls' dorms. Isn't it true that whenever a guy tries the stairs turn into a slide?
That's all I can think of without your story in front of me, but I really like it so far.
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« Reply #1 on Feb 18, 2008, 12:36pm » | |
Yay! Thanks! Check fanfiction.net sometimes to see if i update it, cuz i don't know if i'll remember to post it here
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« Reply #2 on Feb 18, 2008, 12:38pm » | |
oh yeah, in response to your comments, I know I made Jaden a bit over the top.... I never know quite how far to go with him. About the sortings.... I thought he did talk to them, because isn't that how people end up in the house they want to be in? Their head talks to him?
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« Reply #3 on Feb 18, 2008, 12:38pm » | |
Yeah, and the boys can't go to the girls dorms, i forgot about then i wrote it
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« Reply #4 on Feb 19, 2008, 11:27am » | |
The Sorting Hat normally just shouts the house. Unlike Harry Potter and Hermione and Ron though...because they're the main characters.
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« Reply #5 on Feb 19, 2008, 12:35pm » | |
Well, for all we know it talks to all of them, but we only saw Harry, Ron and Hermione's
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« Reply #6 on Feb 19, 2008, 2:28pm » | |
That's because they're specialer than everyone else. Even Malfoy didn't get a conversation with the sacred Sorting Hat.
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« Reply #7 on Feb 19, 2008, 3:31pm » | |
you don't know that, he only didn't get one in the movie because the movies suck
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« Reply #8 on Feb 19, 2008, 5:11pm » | |
Well in the book he didn't get a convo.
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« Reply #9 on Feb 19, 2008, 7:57pm » | |
Well we don't know that, you only know that the sorting hat knew very quickly he was a slytherin. For all we know this could have been because Draco's head said: I wanna be a Slytherin. and the hat said: okie dokie, and shouted it out loud.
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« Reply #10 on Feb 20, 2008, 3:15pm » | |
Must we really argue about this?
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« Reply #11 on Feb 20, 2008, 4:32pm » | |
Hey, I like pudding.
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« Reply #12 on Feb 20, 2008, 5:12pm » | |
And we're arguing about pudding now?
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« Reply #13 on Feb 21, 2008, 8:10am » | |
YES!
I LIKE PUDDING, WHO ELSE LIKES PUDDING?!
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« Reply #14 on Feb 21, 2008, 4:05pm » | |
Not me.
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« Reply #15 on Feb 22, 2008, 5:34am » | |
No we don't have to. But as you all know, I get very defensive about Harry Potter facts and knowledge because I have read all of the books countless times, read all of JKR's interviews, surfed MN, TLC and Immeritus millions of times, read all of the fanfiction and am a Mugglecast fangirl. So i would assume I am the biggest Harry Potter fan here, and thereby probably know more about the fandom.
P.S. Happy Snow Day everyone!
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« Reply #16 on Feb 22, 2008, 11:44am » | |
Happy Snow Day to you too.
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